Prompt: Describe a real moment in your life that felt like the beginning of a powerful story. Tell what happened, and why it felt like a turning point in your life?

 Every time I tried to jump for a rebound, a sharp, burning pain flared up right below my kneecap and made it impossible to explode off the floor. My physical therapist explained that my patellar tendon was overworked from all the jumping, so I had to trade my sneakers for ice packs and specialized strengthening exercises. That flare-up was a turning point because it forced me to stop relying on raw talent and start taking my recovery and body mechanics seriously.

Today we learn how to write a rhetorical analysis writing 

We wrote our rhetorical analysis and wrote a claim, evidence, and commentary.

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